incident-{disclosure,response}: small wording updates

Post-merge suggestions from #12 (review)
tailscale · Jul 28, 2023 · 7584fdf · 7584fdf
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diff --git a/incident-disclosure/index.md b/incident-disclosure/index.md
@@ -35,4 +35,4 @@ To disclose security vulnerabilities, Tailscale publishes security bulletins pub
 
 To notify users about security vulnerabilities, Tailscale will **email** affected tailnets’ administrators, with information specific to the tailnet, including specific users or nodes which are affected. These emails will be sent to the [security contact](https://tailscale.com/kb/1224/contact-preferences/#setting-the-security-issues-email) for the tailnet, which by default is the Owner of the tailnet.
 
-Occasionally, Tailscale may decide to notify users in additional ways about a security issue, such as by publishing a [blog post](https://tailscale.com/blog/), or with in-product notifications by putting a warning banner in the admin console.
+Occasionally, Tailscale may decide to notify users in additional ways about a security issue, such as by publishing a [blog post](https://tailscale.com/blog/), or with in-product notifications (such as by putting a warning banner in the admin console).
diff --git a/incident-response/index.md b/incident-response/index.md
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ All employees should watch for potentially suspicious activities, including:
 * Modification or defacement of websites
 * New open network ports on a system
 
-Tailscale regularly reviews logs for detecting and tracking attempted intrusions and other suspicious activity. These include git, cloud, networking, SaaS tool, and other infrastructure logs.
+Tailscale regularly reviews logs to detect and track attempted intrusions and other suspicious activity. These include git, cloud, networking, SaaS tool, and other infrastructure logs.
 
 The Security Review Team: