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Hosted Private Cloud : Guides for IAM activation (faq, getting started, how to) #6264

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@pg-ovh pg-ovh commented May 6, 2024 •
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I added just few details balises, just remove it if it's to tricky for you guys to have it. It for the schema only, to reduce page size.

@pg-ovh pg-ovh changed the title Hosted Private Cloud [SK-1376/77]: Guides for IAM activation on OVH VMware private cloud Hosted Private Cloud [SK-1376/77]: Guides for IAM activation (faq, getting started, how to) May 6, 2024
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pg-ovh commented May 21, 2024

Hello @OVH-Team-Guides I have added the necessary editions required, let me know if it's okay.

@OVH-Team-Guides OVH-Team-Guides added Guide creation The Pull Request contains at least 1 new guide (meta.yaml and index edition needed) Quality Check The Guides Team is analyzing content. Please do not commit when is label is applied. and removed Edition needed Content needs edition from the author before Quality Check by the Guides Team can start/resume labels May 21, 2024
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...ed_private_cloud/hosted_private_cloud_powered_by_vmware/vmware_iam_activation/guide.fr-fr.md
excerpt: "Découvrez comment activer IAM dans Vsphere"
updated: 2024-05-17
title: "IAM pour VMware on OVHcloud - Comment activer IAM"
excerpt: "Découvrez comment activer IAM pour votre offre VMware on OVHcloud via l'espace client OVHcloud ou par le biais de l'API OVHcloud"
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On met dans le exerpt : "...via l'espace client OVHcloud ou par le biais de l'API OVHcloud"
Pour améliorer le referencement @Y0Coss, ça rallonge je trouve, mais si la taille n'a pas d'importance c'est mieux en effet.

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L'excerpt peut en effet être plus long, tu peux le tester dans https://www.highervisibility.com/seo/tools/serp-snippet-optimizer/ (champ "Description"). Ici il fait 835px sur 990px max conseillés, donc il est dans les clous.

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1. Accéder à la console OVHcloud, en suivant [le lien de l'espace client](/links/manager) et connecter vous avec vos identifiants.
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Je préfere les numérotations car ça permet de vraiment voir les étapes importante et nécéssaire à la bonne éxécution du guide "tutoriel". Dans un guide plus sommaire en effet ça peut porter à confusion.
Exemple : https://cloud.ibm.com/docs/vmware-service?topic=vmware-service-vmware-as-a-service-vdc

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Je comprends ton point de vue mais la numérotation n'est pas applicable pour ce type de descriptions. Tous les guides OVHcloud, à quelques exceptions près peut-être, suivent ce modèle.

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I have added comments @Y0Coss, I would recommend waiting for Aymeric feedback before english translation. Your recommendations are perfect. I'll add them in the next guides. Thanks.

@OVH-Team-Guides OVH-Team-Guides merged commit ec6bd6c into develop May 23, 2024
@OVH-Team-Guides OVH-Team-Guides deleted the pga_vmware_iam_getting_started branch May 23, 2024 14:12
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