KSC code review

Co-authored-by: ksc-odoo <73958186+ksc-odoo@users.noreply.github.com>

content/applications/inventory_and_mrp/inventory/shipping_receiving/advanced_operations_shipping/labels.rst

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ operation.
 .. example::
    For :doc:`two-step delivery <../daily_operations/receipts_delivery_two_steps>`, where products
    are placed directly in packages during picking, companies can print shipping labels during
-   picking instead of delivery. Odoo allows enabling the :guilabel:`Print Label` feature on the
+   picking instead of delivery. Odoo allows users to enable the :guilabel:`Print Label` feature on the
    `Pick` operation itself to achieve this flexibility.
 
    .. image:: labels/pick-print-label.png
@@ -55,12 +55,12 @@ Print tracking labels
 =====================
 
 To configure automatic printing of tracking labels, add the third-party carrier to the sales order
-(SO) in the *Sales* app. Then, validate the delivery order (DO) or the relevant operation to trigger
+(SO) in the *Sales* app. Then, validate the delivery order (DO), or the relevant operation, to trigger
 the label to be automatically printed.
 
 .. note::
    For companies using two or three step delivery, refer to the :ref:`printing labels for multi-step
-   delivery <inventory/shipping_receiving/picking-config>` section to print the label during the
+   delivery <inventory/shipping_receiving/picking-config>` section to learn how to print the label during the
    picking or packing operation.
 
 When both the *Sales* and *Inventory* apps are installed, begin on the :menuselection:`Sales app`,
@@ -86,9 +86,9 @@ click the :guilabel:`Add Shipping` button in the bottom-right corner of the quot
    :alt: Show the "Add Shipping" button on the quotation.
 
 In the resulting pop-up window, select the intended carrier from the :guilabel:`Shipping Method`
-drop-down menu. The :guilabel:`Total Order Weight` field is automatically populated based on the
+drop-down menu. The :guilabel:`Total Order Weight` field is automatically populated, based on the
 :ref:`weight of products in the order <inventory/shipping_receiving/configure-weight>`. Modify this
-field to overwrite the predicted weight and use this weight to estimate the cost of shipping.
+field to overwrite the predicted weight, and use this weight to estimate the cost of shipping.
 
 Next, click :guilabel:`Get Rate` to display the shipping cost for the customer, via the third-party
 carrier in the :guilabel:`Cost` field.