[IMP] on prem password reset final edits

content/administration/on_premise/deploy.rst

@@ -598,26 +598,26 @@ It should be stored securely, and should be generated randomly e.g.
 
     $ python3 -c 'import base64, os; print(base64.b64encode(os.urandom(24)))'
 
-which will generate a 32 characters pseudorandom printable string.
+which generates a 32-character pseudorandom printable string.
 
 Reset the master password
 -------------------------
 
-There may be instances where the master password is misplaced or compromised and needs to be reset.
-The following process is for system administrators of an Odoo on-premise database to manually reset
-and re-encrypt the master password.
+There may be instances where the master password is misplaced, or compromised, and needs to be
+reset. The following process is for system administrators of an Odoo on-premise database detailing
+how to manually reset and re-encrypt the master password.
 
 .. seealso::
    For more information about changing an Odoo.com account password, see this documentation:
    :ref:`odoocom/change_password`.
 
 When creating a new on-premise database, a random master password is generated. Odoo recommends
-using this password to secure the database. This password is implemented by default so there is a
+using this password to secure the database. This password is implemented by default, so there is a
 secure master password for any Odoo on-premise deployment.
 
 .. warning::
    When creating an Odoo on-premise database the installation is accessible to anyone on the
-   internet until this password is set to secure the database.
+   internet, until this password is set to secure the database.
 
 The master password is specified in the Odoo configuration file (`odoo.conf` or `odoorc` (hidden
 file)). The Odoo master password is needed to modify, create, or delete a database through the
@@ -626,7 +626,7 @@ graphical user interface (GUI).
 Locate configuration file
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-First, :guilabel:`Open` the Odoo configuration file (`odoo.conf` or `odoorc` (hidden file)).
+First, open the Odoo configuration file (`odoo.conf` or `odoorc` (hidden file)).
 
 .. tabs::
 
@@ -645,19 +645,20 @@ First, :guilabel:`Open` the Odoo configuration file (`odoo.conf` or `odoorc` (hi
 Change old password
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-Then, modify the old password in the configuration file to a temporary password.
+Once the appropriate file has been opened, proceed to modify the old password in the configuration
+file to a temporary password.
 
 .. tabs::
 
    .. tab:: Graphical user interface
 
       After locating the configuration file, open it using a (:abbr:`GUI (graphical user
-      interface)`). This can be achieved by simply double clicking on the file and the device should
-      have a default :abbr:`GUI (graphical user interface)` to open the file with.
+      interface)`). This can be achieved by simply double clicking on the file. Then, the device
+      should have a default :abbr:`GUI (graphical user interface)` to open the file with.
 
-      Next, modify the line to the master password `admin_passwd = $pbkdf2-sha…` to `admin_passwd =
-      newpassword1234`. This password can be anything as long as it is saved temporarily. Modify all
-      characters after the `=`.
+      Next, modify the master password line `admin_passwd = $pbkdf2-sha…` to `admin_passwd =
+      newpassword1234`, for example. This password can be anything, as long as it is saved
+      temporarily. Make sure to modify all characters after the `=`.
 
       .. example::
          The line appears like this:
@@ -668,15 +669,15 @@ Then, modify the old password in the configuration file to a temporary password.
 
    .. tab:: Command-line interface
 
-      Modify the line to the master password using the following Unix command.
+      Modify the master password line using the following Unix command detailed below.
 
-      Connect to the Odoo server's terminal via Secure Shell (SSH) protocol and edit the
+      Connect to the Odoo server's terminal via Secure Shell (SSH) protocol, and edit the
       configuration file. To modify the configuration file, enter the following command:
       :command:`sudo nano /etc/odoo.conf`
 
-      After opening the configuration file, modify the line to the master password `admin_passwd =
-      $pbkdf2-sha…` to `admin_passwd = newpassword1234`. This password can be anything as long as it
-      is saved temporarily. Modify all characters after the `=`.
+      After opening the configuration file, modify the master password line `admin_passwd =
+      $pbkdf2-sha…` to `admin_passwd = newpassword1234`. This password can be anything, as long as
+      it is saved temporarily. Make sure to modify all characters after the `=`.
 
       .. example::
          The line appears like this:
@@ -686,29 +687,29 @@ Then, modify the old password in the configuration file to a temporary password.
          The modified line appears like this: `admin_passwd = newpassword1234`
 
 .. important::
-   It is essential that the password is changed to something else rather than triggering a new
+   It is essential that the password is changed to something else, rather than triggering a new
    password reset by adding a semicolon `;` at the beginning of the line. This ensures the database
    is secure throughout the entire password reset process.
 
 Restart Odoo server
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-Following setting the temporary password, a restart of the Odoo server is necessary.
+After setting the temporary password, a restart of the Odoo server is **required**.
 
 .. tabs::
 
    .. tab:: Graphical user interface
 
-      To restart the Odoo server, first, type `services` into the Windows :guilabel:`Search Bar`.
-      Then, select the :guilabel:`Services` application and scroll down to the :guilabel:`Odoo`
+      To restart the Odoo server, first, type `services` into the Windows :guilabel:`Search` bar.
+      Then, select the :guilabel:`Services` application, and scroll down to the :guilabel:`Odoo`
       service.
 
-      Next, right click on :guilabel:`Odoo` and select :guilabel:`Start` or :guilabel:`Restart`.
+      Next, right click on :guilabel:`Odoo`, and select :guilabel:`Start` or :guilabel:`Restart`.
       This action manually restarts the Odoo server.
 
    .. tab:: Command-line interface
 
-      Then restart the Odoo server by typing the command: :command:`sudo service odoo15 restart`
+      Restart the Odoo server by typing the command: :command:`sudo service odoo15 restart`
 
       .. note::
          Change the number after Odoo to fit the specific version the server is running on.
@@ -723,13 +724,13 @@ browser.
    Replace `server_ip` with the IP address of the database. Replace `port` with the numbered port
    the database is accessible from.
 
-Next, click :guilabel:`Set Master Password` and type in the previously selected temporary password
+Next, click :guilabel:`Set Master Password`, and type in the previously-selected temporary password
 into the :guilabel:`Master Password` field. Following this step, type in a :guilabel:`New Master
-Password`. The :guilabel:`New Master Password` will be hashed or encrypted once the
+Password`. The :guilabel:`New Master Password` is hashed (or encrypted), once the
 :guilabel:`Continue` button is clicked.
 
-The password has been successfully reset, and a hashed version of the new password now appears in
-the configuration file.
+At this point, the password has been successfully reset, and a hashed version of the new password
+now appears in the configuration file.
 
 .. seealso::
    For more information on Odoo database security, see this documentation: