3rd try for cran :(

jennybc · Mar 17, 2015 · 30e671e · 30e671e
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@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@ Title: Gapminder Data
 Version: 0.1.0
 Authors@R: person("Jennifer", "Bryan", email = "jenny@stat.ubc.ca",
                   role = c('aut', 'cre'))
-Description: This package contains an excerpt of the data available at
-  Gapminder.org. For each of 142 countries, it provides life expectancy, GDP
-  per capita, and population, every five years, from 1952 to 2007.
+Description: An excerpt of the data available at Gapminder.org. For each of 142
+  countries, the package provides values for life expectancy, GDP per capita,
+  and population, every five years, from 1952 to 2007.
 Depends: 
     R (>= 3.1.0)
 License: CC0

diff --git a/cran-comments.md b/cran-comments.md
@@ -1,6 +1,10 @@
 ## Resubmission
 This is a resubmission. In this version I:
 
+* Do not begin the Description field with "This package ..." but instead with "An excerpt of the data ...".
+
+In a previous submission, I made these changes:
+
 * Reference Gapminder.org in the Description field of DESCRIPTION file. It was
 already provided in the URL field.
 * Mention that the data is for specific countries, before I describe the variables, e.g. GDP per capita.