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10-gis.Rmd

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 ## Introduction
 
 A defining feature of [interpreted](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Interpreter_(computing)) languages with an interactive console --- technically a read-eval-print loop (REPL) --- such as R is the way you interact with them:
-rather than relaying on a pointing and clicking on different parts of a screen, you type commands into the console and hit `Enter` each time you want a command to be executed.
+rather than relying on pointing and clicking on different parts of a screen, you type commands into the console and execute them with the `Enter` key.
 A common and effective workflow when using interactive development environments such as RStudio or VS Code is to type code into source files in a source editor and control interactive execution of the code with a shortcut such as `Ctrl+Enter`.
 In other words, R is typically controlled by a command-line interface (CLI)\index{command-line interface}.
 
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 > With the advent of 'modern' GIS software, most people want to point and click their way through life. That’s good, but there is a tremendous amount of flexibility and power waiting for you with the command line. Many times you can do something on the command line in a fraction of the time you can do it with a GUI.
 
-'CLI vs GUI' debate does not have to be adverserial: both have advantages.
-Which is most appropriate depends on a range of factors including the task (with drawing new features being well-suited to GUIs), the level of reproducibility desired, and the user's skillset.
+The 'CLI vs GUI' debate does not have to be adverserial: both ways of working can have advantages, depending on a range of factors including the task (with drawing new features being well-suited to GUIs), the level of reproducibility desired, and the user's skillset.
 GRASS is a good example of GIS software that is primarily based on a CLI but which also has a prominent GUI.
-Likewise, while R is focussed on its CLI, IDEs such as RStudio provide a GUI for improving accessibility.
+Likewise, while R is focused on its CLI, IDEs such as RStudio provide a GUI for improving accessibility.
 Software cannot be neatly categorised into CLI-based or GUI-based.
 However, interactive command line interfaces have several important advantages in terms of: