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haiku de lalala #2946

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Thank you for submitting this haiku! There are some changes that need to be made to the syllable count in order to have a valid haiku.

A haiku is composed of 3 lines. The first line is 5 syllables long, the second line is 7 syllables long, and the third line is 5 syllables long. Although the majority of the haikus here are written in English, you can submit a haiku in any human language. Verify your haiku syllables with a checker like Haiku Syllable Counter.

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Some suggestions to fix the syllable counts

author: lana_rodolpho
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Vampire bites<br>
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Vampire bites<br>
The vampire bites<br>

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Vampire bites<br>
Eternity is desired<br>
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Eternity is desired<br>
Eternity desired<br>


Vampire bites<br>
Eternity is desired<br>
The one bitten<br>
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The one bitten<br>
It's the one bitten<br>

@ltagliaferri ltagliaferri added the hacktoberfest-accepted Accept for hacktoberfest, will merge later label Nov 6, 2023
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