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Lightly edited existing content and added new information as suggested. #650

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Motivation:

Help developers and beginners start using Swift.

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Lightly edited existing content and added new information and instructions.

Result:

Increase Swift user adoption.

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@shahmishal @federicobucchi - Here are the suggested changes as requested. Feel free to make changes for accuracy. Thanks!

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Some general comments - feel free to take or leave them!

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**Docker and Swift images** - You can run Swift applications within [Docker containers](https://www.swift.org/install/linux/) using [Swift Docker images](https://hub.docker.com/_/swift/). Docker provides a way to package, distribute, and run Swift applications consistently across different environments.

## Build your first app
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This section seems a bit redundant on the install on macOS page - why not just link out to https://www.swift.org/getting-started/

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Hi @0xTim - Agreed. The additional section/information aims to provide basic instructions to help beginners get started through a 1, 2, 3 step-by-step approach, while linking to the same content referenced from the Getting Started page. It also includes brief descriptions (and links) to "basic" tutorials (e.g. getting started w/Xcode), serving as an additional reference point to useful (existing) content. This can be helpful since user behavior varies. That help?


Basic configuration steps are essential for setting up your development environment, ensuring proper project structure, and preparing your workflow for smooth app development.

1. Set up your workspace: Create a new folder for your project or open an existing Swift project folder in Visual Studio Code.
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We should have the sections about VScode, the extension and Xcode before this section

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@0xTim - Added anchors to the basic config section to jump to each subsection (i.e. VSCode, Swift REPL) to maintain the flow of information and mitigate confusion for beginners.

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RobinBateman808 commented May 14, 2024

@shahmishal - See the scope/suggested changes. Thank you!

@shahmishal - removed install on macOS instructions and added lead-in sentences to Install via Xcode and Install via package installer to provide more context for beginners.

The macOS `.pkg` files are digitally signed
by the developer ID of the Swift open source project
by the developer ID of the Swift open-source project
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cc @cthielen for open source vs open-source

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Looks good to me, thank you! (only one question for Christopher)

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@shahmishal, @cthielen - Any decision on the "open source" versus "open-source" format? According to style guide formatting, a hyphen is used when a noun precedes it. However, I will defer to common usage or other advisory. Thanks!

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