Installation QS: final fixes

xml/art_installation-sleds.xml

@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
    <title>The &leanos;</title>
    <para>
     Starting with &productname; 15, the installation medium only consists of
-    the &leanos;, a minimal system for installing, updating, and registering
+    the &leanos;, a minimal system for installing, updating and registering
     all &sle; base products. During the installation you can add functionality
     by selecting modules and extensions to be installed on top of the &leanos;.
    </para>
@@ -231,11 +231,11 @@ disk:
 
 
   <sect2 xml:id="sec-sle-installquick-install-lang">
-   <title>Language, keyboard, and product selection</title>
+   <title>Language, keyboard and product selection</title>
    <informalfigure>
     <mediaobject>
      <textobject role="description">
-      <phrase><guimenu>Language, keyboard, and product selection</guimenu>
+      <phrase><guimenu>Language, keyboard and product selection</guimenu>
        screen</phrase>
      </textobject>
      <imageobject role="fo">
@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ disk:
    <para>
     Read the License Agreement. It is presented in the language you have
     chosen on the boot screen. Translations are available via the
-    <guimenu>License Language</guimenu> drop-down box. You need to accept
+    <guimenu>License Language</guimenu> drop-down list. You need to accept
     the agreement by checking <guimenu>I Agree to the License Terms</guimenu>
     to install &productname;. Proceed with <guimenu>Next</guimenu>.
    </para>
@@ -419,8 +419,8 @@ disk:
       <para>
        If your organization provides a local registration server, you may
        alternatively register there. Activate <guimenu>Register System via
-        local RMT Server</guimenu> and either choose a URL from the drop-down
-       box or type in an address. Proceed with <guimenu>Next</guimenu>.
+       local RMT Server</guimenu> and either choose a URL from the drop-down
+       list or type in an address. Proceed with <guimenu>Next</guimenu>.
       </para>
      </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
@@ -445,7 +445,7 @@ disk:
        If you do not register during the installation, you can do so at any
        time later from the running system. To do so, run
        <menuchoice><guimenu>&yast;</guimenu> <guimenu>Product
-        Registration</guimenu></menuchoice> or the command line tool
+        Registration</guimenu></menuchoice> or the command-line tool
        <command>SUSEConnect</command>.
       </para>
      </listitem>
@@ -541,7 +541,7 @@ disk:
    <para>
     The <guimenu>Add-On Product</guimenu> dialog allows you to add additional
     software sources (called <quote>repositories</quote>) to
-    &productname;, that are not provided by the &scc;. Add-on products
+    &productname; that are not provided by the &scc;. Add-on products
     may include third-party products and drivers as well as additional software for
     your system.
    </para>
@@ -644,7 +644,7 @@ disk:
       <para>
        In subsequent steps, you may also add LVM support and disk
        encryption. You can change the file system for the root partition and
-       decide whether to have a separate home partition or not.
+       decide whether or not to have a separate home partition.
       </para>
      </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
@@ -899,8 +899,8 @@ disk:
      </term>
      <listitem>
       <para>
-       The <guimenu>CPU Mitigations</guimenu> refer to kernel boot command
-       line parameters for software mitigations that have been deployed
+       The <guimenu>CPU Mitigations</guimenu> refer to kernel boot 
+       command-line parameters for software mitigations that have been deployed
        to prevent CPU side-channel attacks. Click the selected entry to choose
        a different option. For details, see <xref
         linkend="vle-grub2-yast2-cpu-mitigations"/>.

xml/deployment_yast_installer.xml

@@ -486,17 +486,17 @@
 
  <sect1 xml:id="sec-yast-install-welcome">
   <title>
-   <phrase os="sles;sled">Language, keyboard, and product selection</phrase>
-   <phrase os="osuse">Language, keyboard, and license agreement</phrase>
+   <phrase os="sles;sled">Language, keyboard and product selection</phrase>
+   <phrase os="osuse">Language, keyboard and license agreement</phrase>
   </title>
   <figure>
   <title>
-   <phrase os="sles;sled">Language, keyboard, and product selection</phrase>
-   <phrase os="osuse;slemicro">Language, keyboard, and license agreement</phrase>
+   <phrase os="sles;sled">Language, keyboard and product selection</phrase>
+   <phrase os="osuse;slemicro">Language, keyboard and license agreement</phrase>
   </title>
    <mediaobject>
     <textobject role="description">
-     <phrase>Language, keyboard, and product selection</phrase>
+     <phrase>Language, keyboard and product selection</phrase>
     </textobject>
     <imageobject role="fo">
      <imagedata os="sled;sles" fileref="install_product.png" width="100%"/>

xml/phrases-decl.ent

@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@
          Provides access to packages for &productname; maintained by the
          &opensuse; community. These packages are delivered without L3 support
          and do not interfere with the supportability of &productname;. For
-         more information refer to <link
+         more information, refer to <link
          xlink:href="https://packagehub.suse.com/"/>.
         </para>
         <para>
@@ -410,7 +410,7 @@
       these recommendations, deselect them manually.
      </para>
      <para xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
-      Select the modules and extension you want to install and proceed
+      Select the modules and extensions you want to install and proceed
       with <guimenu>Next</guimenu>. In case you have chosen one or more
       extensions, you will be prompted to provide the respective registration
       codes. Depending on your choice, it may also be necessary to accept