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 # Welcome to the Azure SaaS Dev Kit!
 
-Getting of to a great and solid start buidling your own cloud-native [Software as a Service (SaaS)](https://azure.microsoft.com/en-us/overview/what-is-saas/).
+This kit provides you with a solid start buidling your own cloud-native [Software as a Service (SaaS)](https://azure.microsoft.com/en-us/overview/what-is-saas/).
 
-The Azure SaaS Development Kit is a deployable reference implementation with pre-built modules designed to help you build  you own cloud-native SaaS offerings:
+The Azure SaaS Development Kit is a deployable reference implementation with pre-built modules designed to help you build your own cloud-native SaaS offerings.  It is:
 
-* It is a [cloud-native](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/dotnet/architecture/cloud-native/definition) control plane implementation that includes commonly needed SaaS components such as identity, onboarding, tenant management and permissions.
-* It is [100% open-source code](https://github.com/Azure/azure-saas), allowing you to build by example or modify/extend to be purpose-built for your particular scenario.
-* The code is fully documented, making it clear how the code functions, and why key design decisions were made.
-* It comes with comprehensive CI/DC DevOps deployment scripts to get quickl up and running and ready for customization as the solution grows. 
+* A [cloud-native](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/dotnet/architecture/cloud-native/definition) control plane implementation that includes commonly needed SaaS components such as identity, onboarding, tenant management, and permissions.
+* [100% open-source code](https://github.com/Azure/azure-saas), allowing you to build by example or modify/extend to be purpose-built for your particular scenario.
+* Fully documented, making it clear how the code functions and why key design decisions were made.
+* Built using comprehensive CI/CD DevOps deployment scripts to get quickly up and running and ready for customization as the solution grows. 
 
 ## Usage Options
 
-How you use the dev kit is up to you, here are some ideas to get you started:
+How you use the dev kit is up to you!  Here are some ideas to get you started:
 
-* Modernizing an existing application to support [full multitenancy](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/architecture/guide/multitenant/considerations/tenancy-models#fully-multitenant-deployments) as part of a shift to a SaaS based business model.
-* Developing a greenfield SaaS offering for the first time.
-* Migrating a SaaS offering from another cloud to Azure.
+* Modernize an existing application to support [full multitenancy](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/architecture/guide/multitenant/considerations/tenancy-models#fully-multitenant-deployments) as part of a shift to a SaaS-based business model.
+* Develop a new, greenfield SaaS offering.
+* Migrate a SaaS offering from another cloud to Azure.
 
-
-This is not a one-size-fits-all solution. Use as little or as much as you like. It is designed to be both a modular deployable reference implementation and also a reference architecture. You are free to use and change the code contained within this project in any way you'd like (following the terms of the [license](https://github.com/Azure/azure-saas/blob/main/LICENSE):
+This is not a one-size-fits-all solution. Use as little or as much as you like. It is designed to be both a modular deployable reference implementation and also a reference architecture. You are free to use and change the code contained within this project in any way you'd like (following the terms of the [license](https://github.com/Azure/azure-saas/blob/main/LICENSE)):
 
 * Deploy the entire solution to Azure using the deployment scripts provided and make changes to fit your exact use case, and start building your SaaS application from there.
 * Deploy one or more of our modules and hook it into your existing SaaS application.
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 ## Modular Architecture
 
-* [**Identity Framework**](components/identity)
-  * [**Identity Provider (Azure AD B2C)**](components/identity/identity-provider/) - An identity solution that provides flexibility for both local accounts and integration with external providers.
-  * [**Permissions Service**](components/identity/permissions-service) - An API that manages all user permissions and serves to enrich the user tokens returned from the identity provider.
-* [**Signup / Administration**](components/signup-administration/)
-  * A web app where your customers view plans and onboard to your solution.
-  * Provides you with tenant administration capabilities such as modify, remove, etc.
-* [**Admin Service**](components/admin-service) - An extensible API to programatically manage CRUD operations on tenants.
-
-* [**SaaS.Application**](components/saas-application/) - A sample end user application that you can extend or replace with your own code.
+* An [**Identity Framework**](components/identity), which includes:
+  * An [**Identity Provider (Azure AD B2C)**](components/identity/identity-provider/) that provides flexibility for both local accounts and integration with external providers.
+  * A [**Permissions Service**](components/identity/permissions-service) API that manages all user permissions and serves to enrich the user tokens returned from the identity provider.
+* The [**Signup / Administration**](components/signup-administration/) web site, which includes:
+  * A web app where *your customers* view plans and onboard to your solution.
+  * A web app where *you* can administer tenants, including removing them and modifying them.
+* The [**Admin Service**](components/admin-service), which provides an extensible API to programatically manage CRUD operations on tenants.
+* The [**SaaS.Application**](components/saas-application/), which is a sample end user application that you can extend or replace with your own code.
 
 > The Azure SaaS Dev Kit uses a [**fully multitenant deployment**](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/architecture/guide/multitenant/considerations/tenancy-models#fully-multitenant-deployments). Multitenancy is a complex topic with many facets, and there is no *one size fits all* approach.
 >