Merge pull request #55 from mor1/master

wording tweaks; updated wiki entry dates

src/wiki.ml

@@ -434,7 +434,7 @@ let entries = [
     categories = ["concurrency","threads"];
   };
 
-  { updated    = date (2013, 08, 10, 15, 00);
+  { updated    = date (2013, 12, 09, 12, 00);
     author     = mort; (* ++ vb -- need multiple author support *)
     subject    = "Installation";
     body       = File "install.md";
@@ -458,7 +458,7 @@ let entries = [
     categories = ["overview","usage"];
   };
 
-  { updated    = date (2013, 08, 11, 15, 00);
+  { updated    = date (2013, 12, 09, 12, 00);
     author     = mort;
     subject    = "Hello Mirage World";
     body       = File "hello-world.md";

tmpl/wiki/hello-world.md

@@ -9,7 +9,20 @@ The examples below are in the [`mirage-skeleton` repository](http://github.com/m
 
 !! First Steps: Hello World!
 
-As a first step, let's build and run the Mirage "Hello World" unikernel -- this will print `Hello\\nWorld\\n` 5 times before terminating.
+As a first step, let's build and run the Mirage "Hello World" unikernel -- this will print `hello\\nworld\\n` 5 times before terminating:
+
+{{
+    hello
+    world
+    hello
+    world
+    hello
+    world
+    hello
+    world
+    hello
+    world
+}}
 
 First, let's look at the code:
 
@@ -68,6 +81,12 @@ Unpacking the `Makefile` this translates to:
     $ mirage run basic/config.ml              ## run
 }}
 
+Or, as `mirage` knows that it must first `configure` and then `build` before running, simply execute `make basic-run` which unpacks to:
+
+{{
+    $ mirage run basic/config.ml
+}}
+
 If you are on a 64-bit Linux system able to build Xen images, simply change `--unix` for `--xen` to build a Xen VM:
 
 {{

tmpl/wiki/index.md

@@ -8,8 +8,6 @@ Mirage is still in pre-alpha stage, but the infrastructure you see here is self-
 
 *Usage*
 * [Installation](/wiki/install)
-* [Building the Mirage Web](/wiki/mirage-www)
-* [Booting Mirage in the cloud](/wiki/xen-boot)
 * [Hello Mirage World](/wiki/hello-world)
 * [Maintaining OPAM](/wiki/opam)
 

tmpl/wiki/install.md

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-Mirage consists of a set of OCaml libraries that link with a runtime to form either a standalone Xen operating system or a normal UNIX binary. These libraries are managed via the [OPAM](http://opam.ocamlpro.com) tool. After describing Mirage's system requirements, we will introduce the basics of OPAM and setting up for Mirage.
+Mirage consists of a set of OCaml libraries that link with a runtime to form either a standalone Xen operating system or a normal UNIX binary. These libraries are managed via the [OPAM](http://opam.ocaml.org) tool. After describing Mirage's system requirements, we will introduce the basics of OPAM and setting up for Mirage.
 
 !!Requirements
 
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ Also note that the `mirage` configuration and deployment tool relies on the `xl`
 
 !! Using OPAM
 
-We use OPAM to manage OCaml compiler and library installations. It tracks library versions across upgrades, and will recompile dependencies automatically if they get out of date. Please refer to OPAM [documentation](https://opam.ocamlpro.com) if you want to know more, but we will cover the basics to get you started here. Install OPAM 1.1+ for your operating system by following its [Quick Install Guide](http://opam.ocamlpro.com/doc/Quick_Install.html).
+We use OPAM to manage OCaml compiler and library installations. It tracks library versions across upgrades, and will recompile dependencies automatically if they get out of date. Please refer to OPAM [documentation](https://opam.ocaml.org) if you want to know more, but we will cover the basics to get you started here. Install OPAM 1.1+ for your operating system by following its [Quick Install Guide](http://opam.ocaml.org/doc/Quick_Install.html).
 
 All the OPAM state is held in the `.opam` directory in your home directory, including compiler installations. You should never need to switch to a root user to install packages. Package listings are obtained through `remote` sources, which defaults to the contents of [github.com/OCamlPro/opam-repository](http://github.com/OCamlPro/opam-repository).
 After installation, `opam update -u` refreshes the package list and recompile packages to the latest versions.
@@ -49,4 +49,4 @@ opam install mirage
 
 will install [Mirage](https://github.com/mirage/mirage)!
 
-That's it. You now have everything required to start developing Mirage unikernels that will run either as POSIX processes or as Xen VMs using the Mirage network stack. Next, why not try [building a Mirage `hello world`](/wiki/hello-world)?
+That's it. You now have everything required to start developing Mirage unikernels that will run either as POSIX processes or as Xen VMs using the Mirage network stack. Next, why not try [building a Mirage *hello world*](/wiki/hello-world)?