Small grammar changes (#7495)

* Small grammar changes

- Changed admin messages to say "administrative privileges"
- Added notes for :fail and :admin

* punctuation in note messages

diagnostics/networking.bat

@@ -1,38 +1,38 @@
 @echo off
 :: Note: This script terminates WSL. Save your work before running it.
 
-:: Check for administrator access
+:: Check for administrator privileges.
 net session >nul 2>&1 || goto :admin
 
-:: Validate that required files are here
+:: Validate that required files are here.
 if not exist wsl_networking.wprp (echo wsl_networking.wprp not found && exit /b 1)
 if not exist networking.sh (echo networking.sh not found && exit /b 1)
 
-:: List installed Windows features
+:: List installed Windows features.
 echo Windows features:
 powershell.exe -NoProfile "Get-WindowsOptionalFeature -Online | ? State -eq Enabled | select FeatureName"
 
-:: List all HNS objects
+:: List all HNS objects.
 echo HNS objects: 
 hnsdiag list all -df
 
-:: Print the Windows routing table
+:: Print the Windows routing table.
 echo Routing table:
 netstat.exe -rn
 
-:: The WSL HNS network is created once per boot. Resetting it to collect network creation logs
+:: The WSL HNS network is created once per boot. Resetting it to collect network creation logs.
 echo Deleting HNS network
 powershell.exe -NoProfile "Get-HnsNetwork | Where-Object {$_.Name -eq 'WSL'} | Remove-HnsNetwork"
 
-:: Stop WSL
+:: Stop WSL.
 net.exe stop LxssManager
 
-:: Start packet capture
+:: Start packet capture.
 powershell.exe -NoProfile "New-NetEventSession HnsPacketCapture -CaptureMode SaveToFile -LocalFilePath %cd%\\packets.etl" || goto :fail
 powershell.exe -NoProfile "Add-NetEventPacketCaptureProvider -Level 5 -SessionName HnsPacketCapture -CaptureType BothPhysicalAndSwitch " || goto :fail
 powershell.exe -NoProfile "Start-NetEventSession HnsPacketCapture" || goto :fail
 
-:: Collect WSL logs
+:: Collect WSL logs.
 wpr -start wsl_networking.wprp -filemode || goto :fail
 wsl.exe tr -d "\r" ^| bash < ./networking.sh
 
@@ -41,11 +41,13 @@ powershell -NoProfile "Stop-NetEventSession HnsPacketCapture;  Remove-NetEventSe
 
 exit /b 0
 
+:: Error message if the WSL logs fail to collect.
 :fail
-echo Failed to collect WSL logs
+echo Failed to collect WSL logs.
 powershell -NoProfile "Stop-NetEventSession HnsPacketCapture; Remove-NetEventSession HnsPacketCapture"
 exit /b 1
 
+:: Error message if the user does not have administrative privileges.
 :admin
-echo This script needs to run with administrative access
-exit /b 1
+echo This script needs to run with administrative privileges.
+exit /b 1

diagnostics/networking.sh

@@ -7,30 +7,30 @@ fi
 
 set -xu
 
-# Gather distro & kernel info
+# Gather distro & kernel info.
 lsb_release -a || cat /etc/issue /etc/os-release
 uname -a
 
-# Output adapter & routing configuration
+# Output adapter & routing configuration.
 ip a
 ip route show
 
-# Validate that the gateway is responsive and can route ICMP correctly
+# Validate that the gateway is responsive and can route ICMP correctly.
 if gateway=$(ip route show | awk '/default/ { print $3 }'); then
     ping -c 4 "$gateway"
 else
-    echo 'No gateway found'
+    echo 'No gateway found.'
 fi
 
 ping -c 4 1.1.1.1
 
-# Validate that the default route is working (won't work if traceroute isn't installed)
+# Validate that the default route is working (won't work if traceroute isn't installed).
 traceroute 1.1.1.1
 
-# Display the DNS configuration
+# Display the DNS configuration.
 cat /etc/resolv.conf
 
-# Validate that everything is functionning correctly
+# Validate that everything is functionning correctly.
 if type curl >/dev/null 2>&1; then
     curl -m 5 -v https://microsoft.com
 else