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SDOH Additions #929

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@RLordan RLordan commented Apr 7, 2021

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Hey @rando2, I think you have framed the inflammation idea very well. I liked the flow of it and didn't want to get too into the nitty gritty as that would bring in potential mechanics and that not really relevant to SDOH. I have added a few additional references, lines of reinforcement, and picked up a few minor typos. I might have changed the phrasing of one or two lines, let me know your thoughts. I was going to expand a bit on the vaccines, but I think we are/will be covering it in the vaccine doc.

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