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[OSPO Book] Chapter 5 - Section - Main text (including introduction) #469

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alice-sowerby opened this issue May 1, 2024 · 1 comment
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alice-sowerby commented May 1, 2024

@germonprez has provided a draft for a Chapter 5 main text

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_ko2xz7T14hKbagnu77CB_1ggf6oSCNrnUUaU8sS_J4/edit

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@germonprez thank you so much for sending this early draft. It's a great moment to be able to give some guidance before you have the structure finalized.

I have reviewed the draft as it stands and added comments in the Google Doc you shared (link in the issue).

I appreciate that you likely did not have visibility of some of the things I have referenced in the comments and therefore with the benefit of these resources you will be able to amend your document more easily.

I have kept the feedback high level at the moment as overall the piece would benefit from some rework and restructuring that would negate any low-level feedback at this point.

Let me know if you would like any more input!

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